Audience Feedback

Once we had uploaded our first draft we asked a few media students in the year above to watch it and tell us what they liked and what we could change to make it better. This was a great help as it allowed us to improve our opening and make sure it was appealing to the right age group.

They wrote some feed back on post it notes, there was some positive feedback and some constructive criticism:
*Add 'white noise' to create an atmosphere
*Add more titles i.e. names and production
*Colour grade some shots to suit the genre better
*Add fades between the establishing shot and panning shot